Hello

[Wendy-Chang]

Hi guys,

This is Wendy,I've learned from Internet of you.
I like this club,everyone are so good.

Learning a language needs a lot of practice.
I hope can through this way to do it.
Because there are many obstacles to overcome.
Oh~I'm so nervous.

When I have false words in the sentence,please let me known.
Thank you.


Best Wish

Wendy2008/11/20

[rock]

Hi guys,

This is Wendy,I've learned from Internet of you.
I like this club,everyone are so good.

Learning a language needs a lot of practice.
I hope can through this way to do it.Because there are many obstacles to overcome.
Oh~I'm so nervous.

When I have false words in the sentence,please let me known.
Thank you.


Best Wish

Wendy2008/11/20

I guess they are the bugs you want.

[Wendy-Chang]

Hi rock,
Nice to meet you. Thanks return my message.

(1).I like this club,everyone are so good
It have to change is?
(2)When I have false words in the sentence,
It have to change worse will better?
(3)I hope can through this way to do it.
I still don't knowe what is correct.^_^"
If someone to know, can you give me a good reference?

[dustin12345]

Hi Wendy, welcome and we hope to see you in the meetings soon.

Here are my suggestions for some minor adjustments to your post:

Hi guys,

This is Wendy, I've learned of the club from the Internet.
I think I will like this club, everyone seems so friendly and kind.
Very happy indeed.

Learning a language requires a lot of patience, I hope I can learn while having fun in this club. There are many obstacles to overcome, I'm so nervous...faint...

If I have errors in my writing, please let me know. Thank you.

[Wendy-Chang]

Hi dustin,

Your suggestions are very good.
I feel the structure of the sentence is smooth.
When I ready my introduction again, it's very strange.^_^"

I also want to join with your metting.

[Luis Ko]

Hi Wendy, welcome and we hope to see you in the meetings soon.

Here are my suggestions for some minor adjustments to your post:

Hi guys,

This is Wendy, I've learned of the club from the Internet.
I think I will like this club, everyone seems so friendly and kind.
Very happy indeed.

Learning a language requires a lot of patience, I hope I can learn while having fun in this club. There are many obstacles to overcome, I'm so nervous...faint...

If I have errors in my writing, please let me know. Thank you.

i'm not sure if i'm right but, the sentences in red sound a bit strange..

[chaney]

Hi Wendy,

When I go back to see the messages that I’ve posted in this website, I’m able to find out many mistakes in my writing. It’s unavoidable that people like us make mistakes, but one thing that I’m sure is if I just stand in front of the door and not open it, I only see nothing. Let’s just do it.

[rock]

Hey, Luis, you've been misled by those Yoyos? Since when do you start to care about "strange" expressions? Wouldn't you say "Na yie OK la" to something like this?

[Wendy-Chang]

Dear Luis Ko,

Nice to meet you.
You shared with me in a good reference.
I'll write down it.
Although right and worse are important,isn't all.
So far I can't express my mean clearly in English.
But I still try it. Thank you ^_^

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Dear Chaney,

Nice to meet you.
You say it so good.I have to strode out of the walk.
(I want to open the door)
I'm so happy when I see yours return the message.
Because I know have a practice opportunity in English.
Thank you



☆I hope we'll stay in touch.

[Luis Ko]

hey Wendy, Rock is right. i was just too fastidious about it. actually it's ok to write not so correct English, though it will be great if we can write it correctly. hope you wouldn't be discouraged.

sorry for being rude, if there's any.

[chaney]

Dear Wendy,

I’m sure you would make progress in learning English, because the tracks you left are being out of the door, and keeping in touch with you will be my honor. This website provides us a function of sending private message. It will be a useful tool to interchange what we have learned of English knowledge.

Have a good day.

[bradywang]

Dear Wendy,

I’m sure you would make progress in learning English, because the tracks you left are being out of the door, and keeping in touch with you will be my honor. This website provides us a function of sending private message. It will be a useful tool to interchange what we have learned of English knowledge.

Have a good day.

Aha.. It looks like you two just want to exchange what you learn to each other and not to share with us.
.... so sad....

By the way, "keeping in touch with you will be my honor" is really too formal.

[chaney]

Aha.. It looks like you two just want to exchange what you learn to each other and not to share with us.
.... so sad....

By the way, "keeping in touch with you will be my honor" is really too formal.

Hi Brady,

Thanks for the comment. There should have a better way to express the same meaning that I want to say. By the way, if you are really interested in our conversation, I’ll send a copy to you with the approval of her. How about that.